The rhetorical analysis essay is a free-response question in which you analyze any rhetorical strategies that the author uses in the given passage and evaluate/discuss them in a well-formatted essay. |
Β βThe rhetorical analysis free-response essay question presents students with a passage of nonfiction prose of approximately 600 to 800 words. Students are asked to write an essay that analyzes the writerβs rhetorical choices. This question assesses studentsβ ability to do the following:
Respond to the prompt with a thesis that analyzes the writerβs rhetorical choices.
Select and use evidence to support your line of reasoning.
Explain how the evidence supports your line of reasoning.
Demonstrate an understanding of the rhetorical situation.
Use appropriate grammar and punctuation in communicating your argument."
Essentially, you are being asked to analyze someoneβs writing and what strategies they used to help them achieve their purpose.
β The Thesis of your rhetorical analysis essay for AP Lang can score you 1 point right from the start! |
0 points * Lacks a defendable thesis *The student only restates prompt *The thesis provides summary with no claim *They have a thesis, but it is not in response to the given prompt | 1 point Student has a justifiable thesis that answers the prompt that analyzes the rhetorical strategies. |
To get this point you need to clearly write a defensible thesis about the rhetorical choices the author makes. Do not take a stance on the argument the author is making if he/she is making one. You are only talking about rhetorical strategies.
0 pointsΒ Only restates thesis, has a lot of repetition, and the information doesn't have to do with the prompt | 1 point EVIDENCE: Provides evidence that is mostly general. COMMENTARY: Summarizes evidence but doesn't explain how it applies | 2 points EVIDENCE: Provides some pertinent evidence. COMMENTARY: Explains how some of the evidence provided supports the studentβs thesis, but does not have good reasoning | 3 points EVIDENCE: Provides specific evidence to support all assertions made COMMENTARY: Explains how some of the evidence supports a line of reasoning. AND Explains how at least one rhetorical choice in the excerpt helps to achieve the authorβs purpose | 4 points Β EVIDENCE: Provides specific evidence to support all claims in a line of reasoning. COMMENTARY: Consistently explains how the evidence supports a line of reasoning. AND Explains how multiple rhetorical strategies help to achieve the authorβs purpose. |
To get the four points you need to not only present evidence but explain why it supports your thesis and how it contributes to the authorβs message.
0 pointsΒ Does not meet all the standards for one point. | 1 point Shows sophistication of thought and/or a complex understanding of the rhetorical situation.Β |
To get to this point you have to demonstrate a complex understanding of both what that purpose was, and how the rhetorical analysis devices aided the authorβs purpose.
There are a few ways that you can earn the sophistication point:
You have 40 minutes to complete the rhetorical analysis essay for AP Lang:
6 minutes: Write your introduction paragraph.
18 minutes: Write 2-3 body paragraphs.
2 minutes: Write a quick conclusion.
2 minutes: Proofread and revise your essay.
Outline your rhetorical analysis essay before writing! A great tool for this is a TOBI:
TOBI stands for thesis, outline, and big idea.
TOBI Outline
T- Thesis
O-Outline
BI-Big Idea
Here is an example of how to use TOBI given a rhetorical analysis prompt:
From CollegeBoard AP Lang 2017 Exam, FRQ Question 2
T: Luce uses many rhetorical strategies including pathos, antithesis, and a humorous tone to soften up her audience before introducing her true reasons for being there.Β
O:
-Pathos Appeal
(βThere is no audience more forgivingβ)
-Antithesis
(βI am happy, I am less happyβ)
-Humorous tone
(βconsequently, no audience is more forgiving, I hopeβ)
BI: Today, just like for Luce, it is very difficult to give criticism to your peers.
Note: It is a good idea to make the TOBI about the size of your hand to make sure you donβt spend too much of your precious essay writing time on it.
What if I can't find any rhetorical devices that I recognize?
You can always go back and rely on tone as every piece of literature has one, even if it is just informative. If you know what they are doing, but not the name of the term, you can still just describe it and get the points. Additionally, make sure that you are familiar with
all the rhetorical devices that are a part of AP Lang!
If itβs not an argumentative essay, what do you put in your thesis?
You state the most important writing choices the author made in order to impact the audience of the work.
One of the most useful tools for the introduction is something called Soapstones. In this intro you are introducing the Speaker, Occasion, Audience, Purpose, Subject, Tone, and Style. (Keep in mind: You do not need to include EVERY ONE). But, most successful essays include a few of them.
If you need to, review strategy names, but if you donβt remember, do your best to describe what is going on and how the author is using it.
The speech below was given at the site of the battle of Gettysburg by president Abraham Lincoln. Lincoln went on to describe his desire to save the union. Read the passage carefully and then in a well-developed essay, analyze the writing choices Lincoln makes to share his message with others. Support your analysis of his rhetoric with specific references from the text.
βFour score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in Liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battle-field of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field, as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this. But, in a larger sense, we can not dedicateβwe can not consecrateβwe can not hallowβthis ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before usβthat from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotionβthat we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vainβthat this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedomβand that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.β